Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that owning a smartphone has played a significant role in people's leisure

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and that it has some negative consequences on people. Without cellphones, the world would suffer greatly from issues ranging from communication to entertainment to meeting basic requirements. For starters, we use these devices to stay in touch with folks who live far away from us. For

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reason, owning a smartphone has simplified communication, allowing us to share our lives with those we care about and connect with

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all over the world.

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, because of technological advancements, smartphones have become more accessible to

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of all ages and can meet users' basic demands for relaxation. People can,

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, simply watch a favourite film or keep up with the latest news in their spare

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by using their smartphone to access endless resources on the Internet.

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, the rise of Grab and Uber has made an increasing number of

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reliant on them, from the convenience of not having to drive to restaurants, to persons with impairments or those who couldn't find the goods they wanted at a nearby mall but had to order it from afar. To be more exact, not all restaurants, malls, and markets are evenly distributed, which might cause some inconvenient situations.

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prefer to communicate with one another via sending text messages on their smartphones.

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, inhabitants have fewer opportunities to interact with their neighbours, including family members.

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, eye-related disorders are caused by staring at a screen for lengthy periods of

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, persons who live a sedentary lifestyle are more likely to become obese. In conclusion, while the development of the internet and other technologies like smartphones are very advantageous, it does have bad effects when taking up too much of our leisure

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