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In some areas of the us a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by adults. What is your opinion about this?

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A
curfew
 is used to control the political assembling that occurred in Thailand or the pandemic that spread around the world
such
 as SACOV2(COVID-19) that will help the government easier to control the situation.
Nevertheless
, A
curfew
 may be used to disadvantages the citizen, which are coming in the
next
 paragraph of
this
 essay. The disadvantages of the citizen that caused by a
curfew
.
Firstly
, the
people
 will have less
time
 to do or work a job that makes the domestic money circulation decreasing because
people
 do not have the times to spend their money and in some situations
such
 as a pandemic, the countries maybe have to close the entrance of their countries to stop spreading a disease.
Secondly
, It will limit our life to go out or find an experience because a
curfew
 is not mean merely determining the
time
 you could not go out of doors, it
also
 you can not go to some province.
However
,
curfew
 was required because there was something wrong with the situation.
on the other hand
,
curfew
 recovers the situation when it was used at the right
time
 because if it is too late it will be no better than was not used it.
Moreover
, when a
curfew
 has to be enforced mostly it is used to make the pros for their
people
 than to take advantage. to conclude, I think a
curfew
 for teenagers in which some areas is no different from the
curfew
 that applies to the whole country. because it is used to protect
people
 from bad situations at that
time
.
Therefore
, curfews have at least one reason before it was applied.
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