Weather countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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countries
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any reason that they can not be able to help
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citizens to grow. Strong
countries
must help those needy
people
with the basic things to live. I am going to discuss some noted points to
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statement. Developed
countries
should help other
countries
in every possible way
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which they need. They should call the refugees to live with them in a normal way as they were living previously. As they can easily get food to live and house to stay in another country.
For example
, as per the recent case of Afghanistan country, the USA and
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Canada are calling to the
people
with free cost to their country and continue their
life
instead
of suffering in
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situation
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. They are taking almost 20% to 50%
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resident
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to get
better
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life
. On the other side, developed
countries
have
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residents, who are living with full rights and security
with
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them
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. If they invited refugees and provided what they require
then
they must sacrifice
life
and
their
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related
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to happiness and many more things.
This
would not be
a
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right way to get
life
to others.
For instance
, the residence
people
feel some helplessness after entering new persons in town
likewise
in the opportunity term because they will
also
do jobs and do everything as others. In conclusion, strong
countries
can call refugees but after making some new rules, policies and trust in
people
who are living so they will always feel their privacy, own rules, and
life
as well. Because of
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the peace will maintain with satisfaction among each other.
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