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crime and punishment, how to stop criminals re-offending. Give your views and opinion.

#crime #punishment #criminals
Most of the
criminals
 do
crimes
 due to insufficient money, unemployment and lack of rehabilitation.
Crimes
 are increasing day-by-day
such
 as property cases, child abuse, and violent crime, if we do not take some legal actions,
this
 will lead to major problems and will impact society. In
this
 essay, we will explain why the
criminals
 commit the same crime again and the reasons to overcome
this
.
Firstly
, most offenders tend to commit more
crimes
 , once they are released from
prison
.
This
 is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation in prisons and
also
 the difficulty they face in finding employment. There are a lot of solutions to overcome
this
 situation. The main reason for the repetition of
crimes
 is being surrounded by the
criminals
 and familiar with them.
Instead
 of punishing
crimes
, the
government
 should allow
such
criminals
 to learn some new
skills
 so, they can adopt
such
skills
 after relieving them from jail.
Secondly
,
criminals
 face many problems once they are relieved from
prison
such
 as unemployment, the
government
 should provide basic employment
skills
such
 as labour work, teaching, and engaging them with various kinds of works during their punishment tenure, so they can acquire these
skills
 in order to become self-independent and reduce the impoverishment.
Also
, the
government
 should have a close observation of these people once they relieve from
prison
. To sum up, the
government
 must closely monitor the
criminals
 even after they are out of
prison
 and ensure that there is a reduction in crime rates so that we can make the world a better place to live in.
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