In today' world,some prefer online courses whereas others prefer classroom teaching. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the present world,

classroom

learning involves physical interaction with a teacher, while online learning transfers

this

component to

virtual

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the virtual

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environment.

In contrast

human

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the human

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appears real in front of the

audiance

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audience

in the face to face method

instead

of human visible only through the device

sreans

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screens

screen

such

as computers and mobile phones.

However

, in the current situation ,most

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students

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the students

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tend to use

internet

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the internet

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to find new

thing

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rather than the

classroom

. In

this

essay

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I discuss both pros and cons of online distance learning processes.

Furthermore

this

is a digital era where the most advance technological

equipments

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equipment

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use

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for

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deferent

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different

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purposes.

Firstly

, no need to travel and saving both money and time

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the common

advantages

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advantage

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of online learning.

Inspite

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In spite

of that,

need

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the need

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effective

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self motivation

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and

difficult

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to find

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answers and health effects are the prominent disadvantages. In short,there are negative and

possitive

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positive

to the learner who gets all the things to study

via

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online.

On the other hand

conventional

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the conventional

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classroom

method has both pros and cons too.

Although

this

is emphasize

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superiority over the online and

collaborstion

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collaboration

of with each other,some teachers give

favouration

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favouritism

towards specified students.

Thus

, the above

mension

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mentioned

mention

methods

also

have merits and

dismerits

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demerits

. In summary, the processes given above has advantages and disadvantages to a person who

gain

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knowledge. In

conclusion

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personally

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I believe that

classroom

learning is more powerful than online learning.

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

229 words

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Fully explain your ideas

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