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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people, who lost their jobs because of it.

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E-commerce has become one of the largest sources for people to trade goods. Getting your desired item delivered to you at your doorsteps, doesn’t it sound amazing?
However
,
this
 increasing popularity does come with its demerits too.
This
 essay will focus on its advantages and disadvantages and the impact it has had on the environment and on jobs. Online shopping helps one to buy the exact stuff they want with a tap of a finger.
Moreover
, people
also
 get large discounts and can get things sold in different parts of the world delivered to them.
However
, as these items are transported from distant places they needed to be sent cautiously. The e-commerce
companies
,
therefore
, use various kinds of protective layers made of paper and plastic,
for
example
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 bubble wraps, cardboard boxes etc. The plastic pollutes the environment as it doesn’t decompose for years and the carboard is obtained by cutting trees which causes deforestation.
As a result
, it degrades the environmental condition of the planet. These online marketing
companies
 have
also
 taken
large
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 number of jobs. These
companies
 depend on deep discounting and give more discounts than the local retailer. As a consequence, retail shops and malls lose a lot of customers and
therefore
 are forced to cut down their workforce. They do
also
 generate jobs but these are a lot less than those lost.
Therefore
, they
also
 increase unemployment among the people. I believe that these
companies
 won’t survive in the long run if they continue to function like
this
. The method of deep discounting is not a sustainable practice and sooner or later different governments across the globe will apply strict laws for environment conservation.
This
 can be seen as many new e-commerce
companies
 lose customers as soon as they stop deep discounting. In conclusion,
although
 they have their own advantages, some methods need to be changed to survive for a long period of time.
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