Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

Some people expressed environmental pollution as specific
plants
, insects and
animals
disappear from the planet. Other parts of the community believe that there are more other things should include to the environment pollution. In
this
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I’m going to discuss my personal thought about the topic.
First
of all, with the industrial revolution, humans expand their activities to different levels.
Such
as the dry land used to build factories, farms, houses and etc…
Therefore
, most of the
animals
, insects,
plants
and trees lost their native environment.
However
, due to new human habits, they expand their consumable product range to a vast area. In that case, the above mentioned most of the natural resources consumed to develop goods and services for people needs.
This
is the beginning of the clash between the human and the nature.
Therefore
, various numbers of resources began to disappear from the planet. We could identify these are the early environmental issues and still continuing.
On the other hand
, other parts of the community believe that losing
plants
, insects and
animals
are not only
the
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environmental issue. After the industrial revolution, Co2 emissions increased rapidly and that directly affects the air.
However
, polluted air cause climate change all around the world,
such
as the Greenhouse gases were the key factor to increase the planet temperature.
This
will be the main reason to melt the glaciers. The melted glaciers would be the main cause of the development of the sea level.
This
would directly affect to the human and the nature. In my point of view, I could identify, there are major environmental issues rather than the
plants
and
animals
.
Such
as polluted air, water and soil, damage to the ozone layer, ocean bed and climate change could count as natural problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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