Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no long pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject the announcements. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
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It seems that purchase may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.
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To select doesn’t seem to work here.
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It seems that shopaholic may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite