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Examine the arguments in favour ofband against banimal experiments and come to conclusion on the issue.

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In the advanced ,era several issues are related to
animals
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experiments
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 are regularly discussed day by day.
Animals
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 should not be used in testing because it is cruel and useless . The essay will examine the arguments in supporting and against animal testing in upcoming paragraphs
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This
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 will lead to a logical conclusion.
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 ,the individuals who are the supports of animal
experiments
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 say that we must do
experiments
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 on
animals
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for instance
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 many famous life-saving medicines were invented in
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 way and
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 always help us to find more cures and treatments in the future. ,
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 we know about possible cures for cancer, covid nineteen, cancer, malaria.
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, through
animal
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the animal
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 ,
experiments
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 we are making
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lot of human life-saving drugs. These
experiments
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also
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helps
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ellocate
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allocate
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 the possible mire cures for aids and dengue.
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, they believe that it is not true
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animals
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 testing in scientific labs are responsible for reducing the number of wild
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 on earth. On other hand, other individuals feel that are good arguments against
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first
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 and foremost
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taken
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lot
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 of pains from
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experiments
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.
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 to these
experiments
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 are increasing the mortality rate of
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 they believe that these tests are not really important and
infact
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in fact
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 are not only used to test new medicines and new cosmetics which could be tested on humans
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 another issue is that
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 gave us wrong results because animal bodies are exactly same like
man
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a man
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. In conclusion, according to
me
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animals
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 testing should not be continued because these
experiments
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 reducing the
the
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animals
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 on
planet
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the planet
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 and
animals
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 suffering many problems from
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 it is promoted by all means
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