Examine the arguments in favour ofband against banimal experiments and come to conclusion on the issue.

In the advanced ,era several issues are related to
animals
experiments
are regularly discussed day by day.
Animals
should not be used in testing because it is cruel and useless . The essay will examine the arguments in supporting and against animal testing in upcoming paragraphs
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This
will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly
,the individuals who are the supports of animal
experiments
say that we must do
experiments
on
animals
for instance
many famous life-saving medicines were invented in
this
way and
animals
always help us to find more cures and treatments in the future. ,
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we know about possible cures for cancer, covid nineteen, cancer, malaria.
Moreover
, through
animal
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the animal
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,
experiments
we are making
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lot of human life-saving drugs. These
experiments
also
helps
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ellocate
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allocate
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the possible mire cures for aids and dengue.
Therefore
, they believe that it is not true
animals
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testing in scientific labs are responsible for reducing the number of wild
animals
on earth. On other hand, other individuals feel that are good arguments against
this
the
first
and foremost
animals
taken
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lot
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of pains from
this
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experiments
.
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to these
experiments
are increasing the mortality rate of
animals
.
Furthermore
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they believe that these tests are not really important and
infact
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in fact

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animals
are not only used to test new medicines and new cosmetics which could be tested on humans
instead
another issue is that
animals
gave us wrong results because animal bodies are exactly same like
man
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a man

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. In conclusion, according to
me
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animals
testing should not be continued because these
experiments
reducing the
the
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animals
on
planet
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and
animals
suffering many problems from
this
.
Hence
it is promoted by all means
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