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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Nowadays, we can see that many
people
 prefer to wear fashionable
clothes
. In
this
 essay, I will explore the reasons for
this
 trend and discuss the positive and negative sides of
this
 tendency. There is no doubt that when
people
 follow
fashion
, they want to demonstrate their welfare that could help them to get the respect of others. Usually,
people
, who are especially dependent on others’ opinion, try to look
perfectly
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 and
fashion
clothes
 is the best way to reach
this
.
Moreover
, sometimes
people
 spend the majority part of their income or even get into debt to buy clothing which
all
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 the rage. On one hand, when
people
 wear attractive fashionable
clothes
, it creates positive feelings.
Firstly
, we all like new and beautiful things,
that is
 why we like watching
people
 who
well-dressed
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.
Secondly
, when
people
 can afford fashionable
clothes
, it means that economics grows and society prospers.
Lastly
, the
fashion
 industry can bring a significant part of the money to a budget of a country, especially the famous brands, because their
clothes
 are expensive and designed for rich
people
.
On the other hand
, fashionable clothing is very changeable so one
fashion
 trend becomes outdated too rapidly and should be replaced by another.
As a result
, old clothing may be thrown in the dump that certainly brings damage to the environment. To sum up, while
fashion
 as a whole has a positive influence on our society,
nevertheless
, it generates contamination of our planet. If managed in the right way,
such
 as recycling old
clothes
, it could eliminate these negative consequences and
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 only as a sign of prosperity.
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