In the future more people to choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that in the future more people will prefer domestic tourism

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foreign one. In the

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decades because of globalization, trips across the world became very popular and it is likely the situation will change very soon. I can not agree with

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view and in

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essay, I will give arguments supporting my opinion. There is a tendency to travel inside your native

country

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since March 2020 because of the Pandemic. It is well known that many countries imposed restrictions on

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and the borders of these countries were closed.

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, currently, the restrictions related to Covid-19 are gradually abolished and it is likely we all be able to get to any

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year. I suppose that the chance will increase if the governments of developed countries agree with the mutual recognition of vaccine passports.

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, when we make a decision about going on holiday, we take into account our financial possibilities and our disposable income

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the income remaining after deduction of all mandatory expenses. Usually,

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abroad is more expensive than tourism inside your own

country

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, if people can afford to themselves to get new experiences and to see new places, it is likely, they will choose to get new impressions through foreign journeys. In conclusion, while currently, we have encountered obstacles related to the Pandemic and,

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, we can not travel where we want,

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, I tend to believe that majority of people still prefer holiday outside their

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. I hope that the welfare of households will increase and

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they will afford international

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Topic Vocabulary:

domestic tourism
international travel
cultural exchange
national pride
affordability
convenience
ecotourism
heritage sites
local businesses
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In the future more people to choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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Topic: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages