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Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless

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It is an undeniable fact that in most countries the number of homeless and unemployed
people
 is increasing gradually. it is often argued that the state has the responsibility to take care of underprivileged citizens. I think authorities should support disadvantaged
people
 to bring them to a certain level so they can compete in the world. The
first
 reason to support the issue is that in advanced technology most humans jobs are occupied by machines and labour work is reduced. As per one survey since 2012 human efforts jobs are reduced to 20% which are occupied by robots or by automation systems. During
this
 time responsible persons should provide opportunities to the young generation for finding work.
Furthermore
, another major factor is that recession is
also
 a big cause of illegal activities and attract new generation towards criminal acts. Government should prepare some training centres where underprivileged persons should get educated and they could start their own business with that skills or they can be able to find a reasonable job in the society.
In addition
,
this
 act will produce more skilful
people
 in the market who can work more professionally.
Furthermore
, The state can prepare shelter homes for the needed public to live and survive in their difficult time until they find a suitable job and home for living. To conclude, Ministry should bring some laws to support young
people
 for careers and underprivileged
people
 for home.
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