In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kine of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.
In certain countries, excessive fast
food
consumption has Correct your spelling
affected
effected
the Correct your spelling
affected
life
of many Replace the word
lives
people
as it is the cause of health
problems. For the government to impose a higher tax
on this
kind of food
is crucial. I partially agree with this
statement because there are some alternative policies which
may Correct pronoun usage
that
also
steer people
away from excessive fast food
consumption.
Many diseases, obesity, diabetes and hypertension, occur in bad-eating behavior
Change the spelling
behaviour
thus
coercive measure to impose the tax
on junk food
is accepted whether it has effective and is worth managing the increasing number of consumers. First
, it makes fast food
less desirable as higher tax
means higher fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
prices. To illustrate, most people
, including workers and students, have their
limited lunch budgets. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, the state can use this
tax
to promote other health
policies due to the increased
in revenue from Replace the word
increase
this
extra rate can fund Add a hyphen
health-related
health- related
campaigns Correct your spelling
health-related
such
as extra support or benefits for restaurants that serve healthy dishes. For instance
, diners, that have been certified by the government that they serve healthy dishes, may get tax
exemptions or may be able to apply for a business loan from a state-owned bank.
In addition
, here are some policies which may also
steer people
from excessive unhealthy consumption. Government should use other measurement tools and create statistical
Add an article
a statistical
model
Fix the agreement mistake
models
such
as educate people
on healthy products and unhealthy products and implement programs to help young citizens familiarize themselves with healthy
Add an article
a healthy
diet
. Fix the agreement mistake
diets
Citizen
should be educated on the Fix the agreement mistake
Citizens
health
benefits as well as potential dangers that come with food
. For example
, once people
have been thoroughly
, they can choose for themselves and unhealthy Replace the adverb
thorough
food
may cause them to have serious health
problems, which will surely incur unnecessary expense
.
To sum up, using the policy of increasing Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
tax
Correct article usage
the tax
of
fast Change preposition
on
food
is important but the citizen
should use Replace the word
city
others
measures to combine for the maximum benefit of the consumers.Correct quantifier usage
other
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