In some of countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their fitness levels are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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Recently, in different countries, we see increasing the mean of weight some

people

and decreasing the health

people

. In

this

paper, I'm going to tell you about the reason for these problems and give you the important solution to these difficulties. actually, there are many reasons for

obesity

. one of them is

stress

in other words

stress

causes overeating in

people

. when a person has

stress

, he/she started to eating nonstopping.

this

point is mentioned in the researcher studies and all of the reader humans know that. The

cause for overweighting is don't exercise. nowadays,

people

do their work on the internet, so they haven't

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have a

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lot of physical activity like walking or other activities.

this

makes a bad habit and maybe made persons lazy.

then

, they'll be fat.

On the other hand

, there are many solutions that we can be in the fitted shape.

for example

, the government can aware

people

and gave them information about the risk of

obesity

this

action will be doable with advertisements for healthy products and TV programs like health shows.

In addition

people

should do more physical activity and exercise, at least at home.

also

, they can cut down on fatty

food

, go on a diet, dance to music, follow a workout video, or walk around.

this

activity makes them keep fit. In conclusion, there are many reasons for gain weight;

for instance

stress

, eating fast

food

, lifestyle, and so on. but If persons know the risk of

obesity

, not only try to be in shape but

also

even go on a diet.

this

is clear that if

people

know that

obesity

is dangerous, they stay fit and decrease their overweighting. for

this

aim,

people

have to be aware and can go to a club, walking around the house, and eat healthy

food

, not fast

food

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