In some of countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their fitness levels are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Recently, in different countries, we see increasing the mean of weight some
people
and decreasing the health
people
. In
this
paper, I'm going to tell you about the reason for these problems and give you the important solution to these difficulties. actually, there are many reasons for
obesity
. one of them is
stress
.
in other words
,
stress
causes overeating in
people
. when a person has
stress
, he/she started to eating nonstopping.
this
point is mentioned in the researcher studies and all of the reader humans know that. The
next
cause for overweighting is don't exercise. nowadays,
people
do their work on the internet, so they haven't
a
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lot of physical activity like walking or other activities.
this
makes a bad habit and maybe made persons lazy.
then
, they'll be fat.
On the other hand
, there are many solutions that we can be in the fitted shape.
for example
, the government can aware
people
and gave them information about the risk of
obesity
.
this
action will be doable with advertisements for healthy products and TV programs like health shows.
In addition
,
people
should do more physical activity and exercise, at least at home.
also
, they can cut down on fatty
food
, go on a diet, dance to music, follow a workout video, or walk around.
this
activity makes them keep fit. In conclusion, there are many reasons for gain weight;
for instance
,
stress
, eating fast
food
, lifestyle, and so on. but If persons know the risk of
obesity
, not only try to be in shape but
also
even go on a diet.
this
is clear that if
people
know that
obesity
is dangerous, they stay fit and decrease their overweighting. for
this
aim,
people
have to be aware and can go to a club, walking around the house, and eat healthy
food
, not fast
food
.
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