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lIVING IN CLOSE CONTACT WITH NATURE IS IMPORTANT FOR ONE PHYSICAL AND MENTAL WELL BEING. WHY DO PEOPLE NOT KEEP ADEQUATE CONTACT WITH NATURE THESE DAYS? SUGGEST THE SOLUTION.

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Nature
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 is the thing which is mandatory for our living.Each living things get their daily requirements from
nature
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 and living near to it is important for mental as well as physical health.
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 essay will elaborate on why
people
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 do not take
nature
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 as an important part of life and provide possible solutions for that. Today's era is fully technical and all are busy with their
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 to
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 chores and technology. They even do not know what is going on surrounding them. Adults are going on their work and do the work for the whole
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, while their children go to school, extra classes and
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 playing video games take their entire
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. They do not even do not know what is losing. Many
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 are busy on social media, they just forget that what is the advantage of the environment and how it helps us.
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, in Japan to children looked at themselves in the room for seven days to play the game and that causes heavy damage to their eyes.
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, to prevent
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 kind of problem, there are many possible ways by which we can make ourselves healthy and environment loving
people
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. Once a week we need to plan a short family trip or holiday on which we can do many different activities like camping, tracking and so on. We need to put out daily work side and spend the time solitary.
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 do regular exercises and yoga in an open environment, which help to increase the focus of mind and make us physically fit and fresh. Taking Australia as an example where the government declare that
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 who spend more time with
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 have more focus and scoring high in schooling and live longer compared to normal
people
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. In conclusion, despite our daily routine have a tight schedule but we need to spare quality time with ourselves and explore
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 which helps us to make a sharp and focused mind with a fit and healthy body.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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