Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?
Some
people
would rather live in a house
than live in an apartment, as they believe that living in a house
will provide more benefits to them. From my perspective, I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house
. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons to support my opinions.
Firstly
, generally
a Add a comma
,generally
house
,having more space than a condominuim
, can organize several activities which will create benefit to a family. Correct your spelling
condominium
For example
, during the pandemic of Covid-19, people
have to work from their home, while their children have to study from home as well. If they live in a house
, they could help their space and privacy to do their business. In contrast
, an apartment ,which normally has smaller
area, could be difficult to set up a privacy Add an article
a smaller
coner
. Correct your spelling
corner
Thus
, living in a larger place is better than living in the smaller one.
Secondly
, there are more risks of living apartments
than houses. Change preposition
in apartments
This
includes risk
of fire, Add an article
the risk
a risk
risk
from security, etc. Add an article
the risk
For instance
, it can be seen from the news that some people
may cause a fire by
accidentally, leading to the situation that all residents have to evacuate from the building because all rooms are connected. Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, this
situation will be less likely happen
in a Fix the infinitive
to happen
house
.
In conclusion, some people
prefer to moving into a condominium, but considering its benefits and drawbacks will see that there are more advantages to living in a house
, including larger area and less
risks.Change the quantifier
fewer
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
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- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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