In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

These days, the population in the urban area has dramatically increased because vast

people

from countryside

areas

immigrate into the

cities

, which may eventually cause some adverse impact to residents and the environment. In

this

essay, I will decipher the causes why

people

move toward the developed towns.

Moreover

, the consequences of overpopulation in

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urban

areas

will be mentioned. The

first

reason for an innumerable increase in immigration toward the

cities

is a better opportunity to search for better companies, which pay higher salaries compared to those in rural

areas

.

For example

, a prestigious company in Bangkok offers

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salary to a fresh bachelor graduate around 20,000 Baht, whereas, the salary getting from the companies located in the countryside is approximately 12,000 Baht, which is less than almost double.

Secondly

, the urban towns can provide

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better well-being to

people

. Educationally, Bangkok has various quality schools and prestigious universities for children to study, so it is

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for your family member. For

this

reason, the number of

people

in

cities

has enormously

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every year.

Consequently

, overpopulation can cause mental health

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among citizens. To illustrate, many hours struggling on the road as the result of traffic jams can be

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routine in the

cities

.

This

can lead to the stress

occuring

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occurring

from waiting in a car for many hours every day.

Furthermore

, it can wreak havoc on the environmental aspect. As the intensive urbanization for accomodating the increased number of citizens, many trees are

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down, and waste releasing from

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contaminates the water and soil

resouces

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resources

.

Therefore

, these problems should be tackled

immidiately

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immediately

to alleviate the disastrous consequences. In summary, the recent situation that numerous

indivaduals

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individuals

immigate

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immigrate

immigrated

into the

cities

concerns many countries across the world because

people

believe that they can secure

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better opportunity and well livelihood in the urban

areas

, which eventually causes numerous problems detrimentally contributing to the stress, and the environmental issue.