Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the era of industrialization, various animal

species

are currently on the edge of extinction. I agree that the governments make efforts to address problems of not only human society but

also

of endangered animals.

Firstly

, there is no doubt that human beings are considered the most important

species

living on the earth. Being a unique

species

with emotions, intelligence and dramatic evolution, humans have been playing

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decisive role in

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civilization, making the world socio-economy more and more developed over centuries. What people do,

thus

, has

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influence

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other

species

.

For instance

, the habit of reducing daily waste can greatly contribute to the green environment, or the way employing the endangered animals could decide its extinction. That’s why human lives deserve a priority over other creatures. Regardless

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undeniable importance of human

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beings

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, taking action for the conservation of

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cannot be ignored.

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of various

species

obviously leads to

unbalance

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ecosystem. Specifically, it can cause a loss of the food chain, water to other creatures, including humans. It is clearly seen that animal has been

such

a pivotal factor existing side by side with human daily lives.

For example

, even tiny bacteria can help us clean the environment. Sea lions help researchers monitor conditions under the sea where few people are able to go so that useful

study

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and

invention

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will be made. In conclusion, the protection of endangered

species

of animals and the protection of the human

species

should go hand-in-hand. The governments should invest more funds and resources in the preservation of all

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lives for

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global sustainable development.