Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Due to globalization, all goods are transported over the world, which local residents in each
country
can easily purchase everything without any barriers.
This
seems to provide positive change among countries. Since all
products
are available in every part of the world, people will save travelling expenditure and time. Compared to the past, humans took a long way for buying materials or household items from other countries which have been made
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there and have not been found in their
country
.
Moreover
, even though those who are busy with work,
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can get those goods effortlessly by purchasing them in the supermarket nearby the office or home.
For instance
, I and my friends are into Korean cosmetic
products
and clothes, and there are a lot of shops selling them in Cambodia in the present, which we do need to request our friends to deliver those
products
from Korea like before.
In addition
, the businesses will be significantly improved in every
country
provided that the number of customers has been increasing noticeably. Generally, all businesses have put effort to attract more buyers for more income, but they are challenging with international customers in terms of delivery.
For example
, Apple company has been accessing all markets overseas because the company's
products
have been sold everywhere which have the same quality
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such
productshave
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products have
been sold in the United States which is the original manufacturing
country
.  In conclusion, I strongly believe that the availability of the same
productsglobally
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products globally
product globally
certainly has a lot of benefits to both buyers and business owners.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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