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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws
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 world have
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 towards for greener
envirenment
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environment
,and mostly they have
initiative
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 to healthy status by recycling
the
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litter.
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clames
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claims
 that from the misuse in households have
indequate
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inadequate
adequate
 amount of waste have
recycled
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. and they
beleved
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believed
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this
 issue authorities
shuld
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 enforce the laws regarding the same.in my opinion im
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strong
 support to the aforementioned in the article says
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 needs to imposed strict policies for
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recycle
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 their waste.  
Firstly
 the officials should
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strong
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 rules and regulations to follow up
this
prosess
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process
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 it should be
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conjunction
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panalties
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penalties
 if it not exercised.
in other
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 the authority must strictly suggest the community
to
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follow up the new rules and regulations regarding
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recycling the trash
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is
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 an appropriate manner. if it ain't no happen there is a certain
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penalty
 for the action. those important things
needs
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informed
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for instance
. a
survay
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survey
 have found in
USA
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 after imposing the fine for the littering and people became much more alert tha roads and
envirnment
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environment
 clean that ever before.
Secondly
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 the
authorites
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authorities
 should organize the campaign to educate
community
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the community
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 of rural areas
the
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 various ways of
recycle
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 the misuse. similarity the power can educate the students in the schools by taking trips and seminars to let them learn about the hazardous impact
comes
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 with not recycling.
however
its
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 not just a responsibility of the law to make the steps
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for
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get
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 green,
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citizens
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 duty as well.
as
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example
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lanka
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 some
univercities
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universities
 has
orgenaized
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organized
 some walks and days that distribute the
knowladge
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knowledge
 and raising awareness regarding
the
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recycling. To conclude, the people living in the society should recycle as the part of
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habit
not
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 as
obligation
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 for their life. in the same
way
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 there must be no hesitation for
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countries
country's
countrys
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 union to protect the motherland from any circumstances.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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