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You have your birthday next weekend and you are planning to organise a party where you will be inviting all your friends. Write a letter to invite your friend. In your letter, explain the occasion describe why you need your friend to come give directions to reach the venue

#birthday #weekend #organise #party #friends #friend #occasion #directions #venue
Dear Sam , I hope
this
 letter finds you in a radiant of health and great spirits . I am writing
this
 letter to invite you
on
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 my birthday party which will be held on 22nd of March. As you know , I came from Canada to spend
amazing
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an amazing
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 time with my parents , they gave me
majestic
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the majestic
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 idea to throw a birthday party and call all my friends to celebrate my special day with them . All preparation
has
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was
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 done like food , drinks and a DJ . The event will start around 8 pm and end by 11 pm . I would like to invite you because it has been
long
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a long
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 long since we
meet
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 each other
hence
,
this
 occasion will make our friendship bond more strong and I will get plenty of time to share my stories with you . I have booked Saffron restaurant which is situated at Hespeler Village , it will take only 10 minutes from your home to reach the destination. The road is very simple you just need to take
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Hespeler exit from
highway
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 401. I can't wait to see you and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jai
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Clarity
Ensure clarity and precision in your sentences to enhance understanding. Some sentences could be simplified for better clarity.
Punctuation
Pay attention to punctuation rules, especially in regards to commas and periods, to maintain sentence structure integrity.
Engagement
Consider adding more descriptive details about the party to make the letter more engaging and personal for the reader.
Grammar
Review and correct minor grammatical errors to improve the overall quality of your writing.
Tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter. While the tone is generally suitable, some phrases could be adjusted for consistency.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Milestone
  • Cherished
  • Indispensable
  • Jubilation
  • Navigating
  • Landmark
  • Cordial invitation
  • Festivities
  • Anticipate
  • RSVP
  • Commemorate
  • Ambiance
  • Gather
  • Revelry
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