some people think that government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the internet to help them find jobs. to what extent do you agree?

Some argue that giving
a way
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away
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of
searhing
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searching
job
aid is
responsibility
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the responsibility
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of the executives. I completely agree
with
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that the unemployed should be provided
a
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with a
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free mobile and free access to the internet to search
jobs
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for jobs
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.
Aanalysing
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Analysing
Analyzing
the help of administration in the time of not employing to find work and how
this
result of assistance contribute on
development
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the development
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of the nation will prove
this
.
Firstly
, It is clear that with the help of
mobile
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the mobile
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device
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devices
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and free
intrance
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entrance
to the internet make
job
seekers easy to find
job
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a job
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. There
are
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is
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lot
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a lot
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of
role
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roles
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available in the
markey
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market
, which is published online in different
job
board
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boards
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since
nowaday
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nowadays
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recruitment is done only
through
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online.
Furthermore
, By using these devices one can apply for different positions, get interviewed and be hired online, which
also
enable
people
to research and study about
company
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the company
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that they are applying for.
For instance
, indeed, monster and
linkedin
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LinkedIn
Linkedin
are
the
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online
job
board
which
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that
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only can be reached using technology. If the government had not made
these policy
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this policy
these policies
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to help non-working
people
to look for work,
these
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this
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could have led the economy to depression mood.
Secondly
, it is important
to
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for
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the authority to know about their citizen whether they need any help in the time of no work. When the public is employed, the economic condition will go up.
Moreover
, Employment plays
vital
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a vital
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role in
national
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the national
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growth and development of the federal.
For example
, in 2019 the covid
pendemic
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pandemic
hit and many
people
got laid off and the impact can be seen in the economy
all
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of all
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countries.
Therefore
, it is necessary
to
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for
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leadership
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lead
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to help unemployed
people
in finding jobs and employ them.
Finally
, the role of the authority in getting their public finding and working is important. Providing essential assistance
such
as mobile phone and internet access for individuals so they can be employed and contribute
in
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to
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development
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the development
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of
whole
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the whole
a whole
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nation.
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