Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is argued that the extinction of some plants and animals
species
is the prominent environmental disaster of
this
era, While others suggest that other problems are more crucial
such
as
climate
change
.
This
essay agrees that there is an environmental
issue
that is
far more important. The disappearing of certain
species
from their habitat is a very alarming environmental
issue
that can cause serious consequences like the extinction of to follow animals that feed on them leading to an ecosystem collapsing. Another consequence is risking of losing food sources from
species
disappearing especially for people who live in a rural area, for ,example people who live by the river in Thailand are now dependent more on food from somewhere else because the local fish
species
are gone. Another environmental
issue
public is said to be the main problem is
climate
change
. Many scientists from around the world have tried to solve the
issue
but have had no success yet. It has already caused much death through famine and other environmental disasters. For ,example many children in Africa have died from food shortage
as a result
of rainwater level decreases. another example is South-East Asian Countries' forest fire which makes people fell ill with its smog. While the extinction of plants and animals is a very worrying problem it's not the most urgent
on the other hand
at
this
moment
climate
change
has already cost many innocent lives.
This
essay agrees that
this
climate
change
issue
is far more important than
species
loss in natural habitats.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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