Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

Advertisement
has always been a crucial part
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the world of marketing. Throughout the decade, we have seen a significant increase in the
amount
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of
advertisements
, whether it is on the media like television or widespread through social network platforms. The goal of
advertisements
is to get consumers to buy a targeted
product
, and while
this
method has been proven considerably generally, some
people
view it as too prevalent to catch the consumers' attention
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.
Advertisements
can act as a strong persuasion device to seemingly hypnotize
people
into buying goods and services.
This
is so because of the tactics placed in the messages,
such
as showing
people
having a good time together when using a particular
product
, using
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bandwagon
, showing only the upsides of usage, and applying compare and contrast strategies to show the effects of using the
product
and make it stand out. Even if
people
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it, these messages are repeated several times and soon it may brainwash
people
to
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go out and get the
product
.
For instance
, if a person is watching television and sees a certain
advertisement
of a snack many times, the repeated sight of the scrumptious food may result in that person feeling hungry and succumbing to the
advertisement
at
last
.
Nevertheless
, there is another point of view in which the widespread of
advertisements
makes it a normal thing. After watching a dozen of
advertisements
people
will see it as a mere
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routine and cease to pay attention to the message of the
advertisement
. Some
people
may even choose to turn off a television channel,
for instance
, only just to avoid seeing and hearing
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repetitive
respective
advertisements
. After a certain frequency, they start to get bored and stop paying attention to ads.
Hence
, in the end, the main goal of
advertisements
is not complete since the
people
whom
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the messages are sent out
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do not receive that message. A
real life
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example can be seen from
advertisements
in a particular social media platform, Youtube. In the Youtube marketing mechanism,
advertisements
are place
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before and in between videos, hoping that the viewers would
also
be forced to watch the
advertisements
, too.
However
,
this
is not usually the case, since many
people
would just click " Skip Ad" and continue on. In conclusion,
advertisements
can be successful in persuading
people
to purchase goods and services, or they can be
unsuccesstul
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unsuccessful
successful
in many ways. They are very commonly seen nowadays, but not all of them
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their purpose.
Thus
,
advertisements
must be designed and presented in the correct way to result in the highest effectiveness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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