The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increasing rate of obese folks is putting a strain on the hospitals in an effort to tackle

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the health

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involved. Most

people

believe that the best way to arrest

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is to

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a lot of physical education classes in the school curriculum. I completely disagree that more physical education tutorials in school

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will reduce the problems of obesity.

Firstly

, to reduce the workloads on the hospital settings from fat

people

is for the government to put more tax on fast food restaurants. The number of

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joints has increased over the years due to laziness and high patronage from the public, and

this

food contains

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level of cholesterol that causes obesity and other diseases.

In addition

, government agencies should

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stringent

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tax

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on

such

meals to discourage

people

from purchasing them.

For example

, in the

last

decades, the growing rate of obese folks in India has plummeted drastically, because the parliament has passed a law to prevent high consumption

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foods and

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production.

As a result

, India is leading the campaigns against overweight globally.

Hence

,

this

has reduced the pressure on the clinical settings in India significantly.

Secondly

, the proportion of weighty citizens can be reduced by encouraging schools to teach more on healthy diets.

Healthy

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balanced diet is very important for the

wellbeing

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of individuals and should be taught in schools. More so, media houses should publicize more on

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and

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importance, as

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very necessary to

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the blood cholesterol levels.

For instance

, in 2019, in

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many Institutions started taking courses on healthy foods and adequate diets, after few years the number

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people

dropped significantly.

Therefore

, proper education on meals and more adverts on adequate foods will help prevent overweight. In conclusion, the high level of fat in folks has put more

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pressure

on the health care systems, I believed high tariffs should

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on

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and the media should educate the citizens on the benefits of Good diets.