The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. How far do you agree with this prediction?!

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For years now,the advancement of technology has
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a huge impact
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our social life.Several people assume that the network will never take over handbooks in academic places.In
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statement by giving examples and my opinion.
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with,most of the time different courses have been organised by human interaction,manual textbooks,pens etc.It is considered to be
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efficient study way to help students improve their academic performance.Even the statistic
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shown that by touching
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the pages of the book
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books
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pages you understand and improve more.
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,the huge progress in
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the informatics
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field gives us the
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opportunity
to take classes online,join in different courses by using only
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electronic
devices.Everything you need or want to learn is online and for free,so you
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don't
have to spend money on buying
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,papers,notebooks etc.It is true that the
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internet
has been a great
sourse
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source
to find all kinds of information,but
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believe that it can never teach you as a person will. Taking me as an example,in my past academic performance
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have tried them both and I could tell with one which has more positive points and benefits.
Studing
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Studying
Standing
face to face in a course is
definitly
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definitely
better.You
leran
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learn
from others mistakes,you actually understand
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information so
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information
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that you will
neevr
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never
would by using the internet.I assume that the internet will never take
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control
over the
handbooks
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couses
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courses
causes
. In conclusion,
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the internet
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and technology have a big influence
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on
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our
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civilization
everyday life but it can never
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affect
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effect
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affect
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the
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acadamic
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academic
life.
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Internet
can be a
helpfull
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helpful
tool to learn more,but it can never be compared with
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.
Furthermore
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,
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the majority
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of students are successfully achieving their goal by entirely relying on course
books
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