Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate? Discuss both views.
Some folks believe that leaders should prioritize economic growth as a primary goal.
However
, there are some who believe their efforts should be made to better the lives of the underprivileged. Here in this
essay, we will discuss both views.
On one hand
, the economic development of a country is important as it gives the ruling party the money need
to focus on other areas. As the nation grows, more job opportunities are created and Wrong verb form
needed
hence
the unemployment rate drops. But, most people
from the lower classes may not qualify for the job created and the poor will get poorer. For example
, in Bangalore, the IT industry has flourished but this
has not helped the underprivileged people
as the jobs are mostly white-collar jobs and require high qualifications.
On the other
hand
, when the government starts to bring up the less fortunate, more of the population become
employable and a part of the skilled workforce. Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
This
will help in the economic growth. However
, many of the programs introduced by the government may go unnoticed by the underprivileged people
due to
the lack of education. More schemes to provide learning opportunities for the down-trodden
will help. Correct your spelling
downtrodden
For example
, many companies have social responsibility programs but they are used to paint the company as a good one in most cases.
In conclusion, the growth of the economy and the upliftment of the lower classes of people
should go hand
in hand
. In my opinion, both issues are correlated and can fuel the other.Submitted by prash_net85 on
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