Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples in about 350 words.
These days, tertiary tuition is regarded as really crucial in determining one's fate. Others,
however
, claim the opposite, stating that there exist many successful individuals who did not pursue higher education. From my perspective, advanced learning is of great importance as Linking Words
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may well be a facilitator leading to a more prospective future.
In the Linking Words
first
place, it is the knowledge that has long been humans' ultimate source of power. Linking Words
In other words
, the more educated we are, the more potential our career path is, as what we are equipped Linking Words
within
schools would offer us more chances of employment post-graduation. Take, Change preposition
with within
for example
, several well-paid jobs in society, namely programmers, managers or doctors in general. Those occupations altogether demand a profundity of knowledge as well as skills, Linking Words
in addition
to a good many qualifications.
What is more, the number of those succeeding with the aid of Linking Words
further
education is significantly greater than those who did not. Linking Words
That is
to say, the ones who did not pursue advanced learning still became wealthy is only of the minority, not to mention that they are confronted with more insecurity and the increased likelihood of failure or difficulties. Linking Words
For instance
, Bill Gates is unarguably a well-known example of those dropping out of school. Linking Words
However
, not only is he well-educated but he is Linking Words
also
has a privileged background, as not everyone who follows in his footsteps could be of the same type as him.
All things considered, while tertiary education is not the only way to success, it is the shortest and the most sure-fire one, compared to any other alternatives. Linking Words
Therefore
, I am supportive of the notion that advanced learning plays an indispensable role in shaping one's life.Linking Words
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