Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. To what extant do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The world has been more globalized in recent years, and people have had more opportunities to travel
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regions. Some education policymakers thought that
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travel to other countries
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arrangements to get international exposure. I believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks. On the one hand,
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get more awareness from experiences
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it is to city or country. At the schooling age, pupils are in the middle of the habit developing stage if
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arranges international exchange trips that help
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learn new cultures and improve their skills.
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, Suppose a trip is placed from an underdeveloped country to a
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-world country like America, where most recent technologies are born. In that case, that gives a chance to
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to learn it and apply it in their region's development. Similar, pupils from modern counties visit poor areas, which helps them understand what kind of problems
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class faces.
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, the culture is exchanged between two countries, and these
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are ambassadors for cultures.
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, it reduces racism between nationalities.
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, each positive thing has negatives in it.
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, these programs are caused some problems in
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that will continue their whole lives.
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, in most cases, poor
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are inspired by the rich if the modern
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student visits an ordinary
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, which reduces the confidence of local pupils. Maybe due to
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, the local culture will suppress. In conclusion, these programs give a vast understanding between countries teenagers and
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learn and exchange problems and solutions;
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, it affects some
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' confidence
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overall advantages are much higher than disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • exposes
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • enhances
  • language skills
  • promotes
  • independence
  • self-confidence
  • builds
  • lifelong friendships
  • provides
  • unique learning experiences
  • expensive
  • homesickness
  • emotional distress
  • careful planning
  • logistical arrangements
  • disrupt
  • academic progress
  • safety
  • security risks
  • cultural appropriation
  • misunderstandings
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