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Universities should accept equal members of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, much concern has been directed to equality between
men
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 and
women
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. Many books, TV shows, and radio programs are discussing the case. It has been stated that universities should set each intake to contain equal numbers of each gender. In my opinion, I totally disagree that each intake has to consist of the same numbers of male and female
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.
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 of all, the total statistic of
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 is higher than
men
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. Indeed, equality especially in numbers will not be fair at all. According to the World Health Organization, the population of the world is around seven billion people. Five billion of them are female. That makes having the exact same sum of
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 impossible.
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, if 30 male
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 apply for a specific subject, they must be accepted as long as the class's capacity is not full.
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, leaving spaces in a class to maintain an equal number of
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 and
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 is insane.
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, each gender has different characteristics than the other. Males and females do not have the same physical and mental abilities.
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, some extra subjects
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 as art may be more liked by
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. Accepting the same total of both genders is worthless since a student may lose an interesting course for someone who is not interested.
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, a university must help
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 to make free decisions without any kind of pressure. To conclude, there is a considerable difference in the human population of each sex.
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, the different properties of
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 and
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. Make it hard for universities to unify the number of male and female
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.
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, a better student must be accepted regardless of gender.
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