many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
have an unhealthy diet that includes a plethora of sugar. It is believed that the prices
of these sugary products
must be increased to prevent massive consumption. I totally agree with this
statement,because,people
consider the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
products
initially
.
On the one hand, some believe that higher prices
are not affecting people
’s shopping behaviour. Because,
consumers are willing to purchase any sugar Remove the comma
apply
products
whatever they cost. For instance
, a friend of mine is addicted to cakes and she buys them almost every evening. She said that she saw increased prices
on this
kind of dessert in every supermarket in her neighbourhood. However
, she was not bothered by this
development and still add this
sugary product to her shopping list.
On the other hand
, others believe that an expensive price policy on both manufactured food and drink which include the unhealthy and high level of sugar is definitely plays
a vital role Change the verb form
definitely plays
on
customer’s choice. Change preposition
in
This
is because,
every self-conscious Remove the comma
apply
people
can realise that expensive products
are not worth purchasing when they are harmful. For example
, my mother used to feed us within te artificial sweetened fizzy drinks. Then
our government had an explanation of damages of these products
and soared the prices
of raw materials accordingly
. Hence
, my mother had broken her habit and changed her mind to decide not to pay more for them.
To sum up, although
some people
think that increased prices
are crucial for deciding the get rid of these sugary products
, a number of people
still find this
development unnecessary. However
, we should consider the behind of the new price range to prevent any damages.Submitted by basakdiclesahin on
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