Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does cybercrime cause and what solution can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take.

Cybercrime is a serious

problem

in the modern world and finding a solution to

this

problem

is much more complex than just sitting on a chair and browsing on the

internet

.

This

problem

has various aspects, and it involves different factors from political issues to economic ones.

However

, each citizen should make

their

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contribution to the solution of the

problem

. It involves being more responsible about the usage of the

internet

and digital gadgets as well as trying to increase the awareness of the possible problems. Computerized documents provide many opportunities for professionals to do their careers more easily and

efficiency

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.

This

kind of documentation is

also

usable for ordinary

people

in their everyday

activities

. These

beneficials

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beneficial

are ranged

form

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transferring secret information between

government

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the government

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to storing personal

pictures

. These

activities

now are

inseparable

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part of our lives and

human

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humans

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may tend to develop

it

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them

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to some extend. Due to the increased number of hackers,

people

,

however

, should be more aware of the dangers that may occur

among

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transferring and storing

sensible

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data

. In

the

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modern society, most transitions are done via

Internet

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the Internet

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, and online shopping is becoming more common in many countries. So,

people

usually save

their

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information of their banking account on their laptop or personal computer. Some of them even do not try to choose a strong password for their account and may trust

to

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any message they receive from

unknown

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person, and possibly their important

data

can be stolen, and they will lose their

money

.

This

may cause many difficulties in business trades for both customers and sellers.

Therefore

, it seems more wisely to choose

more

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reliable

password

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passwords

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and do not trust

to

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message or link that usually be sent from unknown senders. Today, modern personal computers provide an opportunity for

people

to store their personal

pictures

and other

data

in

the

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large amount. Sometimes they want to share them

into

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social networks to be more visible.

This kind

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of

people

who are usually youngsters

are

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more vulnerable to

cyber

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a cyber

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thief

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thieves

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. They are usually targeted to be threatened to pay

money

,

otherwise

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their personal

pictures

would be spread.

Thus

, it is more sensible that personal

picture

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pictures

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would be stored in

the

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portable hard disks rather than personal computers which are usually connected to the

Internet

. Cybercrime is not limited to the personal

levels

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level

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. The effect of

this

distortion often goes beyond the stolen

money

or personal

pictures

. It is often heard that international hackers disturb the function of the very important organization or official

institution

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institutions

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in different countries. The aim of

this

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activities

is different while some of them are seeking a large amount of

money

,

other

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others

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just want to make a disruption in the government

activities

and distort a vital part of these structures. In these cases, authorities should apply more reliable security codes and systems to protect

their

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crucial parts of their country and make

safe

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a safe

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place

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places

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for their citizens. Overall, actions like providing a good password and using security programs may seem so simple, but they are initial steps to protect

data

and information

in

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both personal and official levels. When all

people

in a country be more aware of the possible problems the

less

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difficulties may occur.