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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hairstyles. In your opinion, what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing?

#countries #people #fashion #hairstyles
Paris and Rome but not far
Tokyo
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from Tokyo
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. In
Europe
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,Europe
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 there are two main cities that
one
 of the principal news are focusing on
fashion
 and hairstyles.
Also
 in
Asia
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,Asia
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 we have Tokyo
that
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which
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 is
one
 of the main important capitals in that continent not just because of pasarelas but
furthermore
 hairstyle, where always there are not just
Japanise
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Japanese
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 but visitors from China, Corea and other countries that enjoy the new tendency of
new
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a new
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 hair cut.
One
 of the most profitable business is
fashion
,
that is
 covering by magazines, hotels, clothes brands and of course, all the companies related
center
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centre
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 malls where you can see the latest pasarellas and of course buy your new jacket or suite that you will love to use in your
next
 dinner night or these special event scheduled with your friends. If you add your new hair cut you will be the sensation of the night. If there are some
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 of
fashion
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the fashion
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 industry, I can say that these
business
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businesses
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 request a lot of energy and time concern, and
one
 of the
reason
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reasons
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 is
becasue
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because
 the people inside are so
strictics
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statistics
critics
 and the jobs are so demand, female and males are requested to be more than
profesional
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professional
, they are always looking for excellences of
one
 artist. I can say there is
lot
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a lot
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 of pros and
conts
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cons
counts
 about
this
 business, but for all
people
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,people
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 the good thing is that they get energy and
confidences
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confidence
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 when they are wearing the latest design of
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the hair
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hair cut
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haircut
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 presented in the capital of
fashion
.
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