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Allowing young children to do an enjoyable activity can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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Nowadays, it is believed that allowing young
children
 to enjoy fun
activities
 would tend to develop many
skills
.
However
, some believe that making small kids love to read books will make them become smarter. In my opinion, I
agree
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 half. I think that students should learn how to read as well as
they
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enjoy fun
activities
.
First
 of all, allowing kids to play with enjoyable
activities
 would better make them learn how to make their own decisions. It is said that fun
activities
 would help
children
 learn how to plan to
compete
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complete
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their
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 opposite side.
For example
, many schools around the world have a club called chess club to attract students to play along as they can develop their decision-making
skills
.
However
,
smalll
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small
children
also
 need to learn how to read in order to develop their hard
skills
. The more they read fluently, the
miore
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more
 they gain new
infomations
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information
 in their life. Many psychologists suggest parents
to
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practice their child on
reaing
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reading
skills
 since they
each
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three
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are three
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yeras
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years
 old. For
examle
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example
, my mom
assign
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 me to read their books to her as she can point out whether I understand it right or wrong. In conclusion, we will see that play is essential to
child's
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a child's
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 development as it contributes to
cognitive
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the cognitive
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, physical, social, and emotional well-being of
children
 and youth.
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