More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of these problems

Nowadays, most

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teenagers are facing the problem of obesity. It is the major issue of the country.

Although

a sedentary lifestyle and overconsumption of junk foods are the main reasons behind it, it affects in several ways

such

as being prone to a number of diseases and loss.

To begin

with, multifarious causes of the aforementioned notion are considerable.

Firstly

, competition is increasing day by day, students focusing on studying for longer hours

instead

of physical activities. Parents

also

motivate their

children

to work hard on education rather than playing.

Secondly

, advanced technology is making

children

lethargic, because youngsters are spending most of their time using social platforms by sitting in the comfort of their home and they lead to overweight. To justify it, the Theme study has been shown that, 60% of youngsters staying active on social media, which is the main cause of gaining weight.

Consequently

, the effects of obesity on

children

are legitimate. Primarily, obese people commonly get health issues

such

as arthritis and cardiac issues. It affects health in different ways. Sometimes teenagers are unable to walk. Secondarily, obese people often lose their confidence. They avoid socializing with other people

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because they know that if they go outside of the home, others will joke on them. So they stay at home all the time.

In addition

to

this

, most of the obese

also

get worried about their fatty body and are unable to focus on studies. To conclude, while, soaring competition and developed technology are the main reasons, it is influencing the

children

in several manners like decreasing competition and increasing health-related problems.