As Earth runs out of natural resources, we have started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do, and instead, we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth. To what extent do you agree with them? What alternatives might there be to exploiting space for natural resources? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
With the rapid advancements of technologies in combination with the depletion of fossil materials on Mother Earth, a lot of scientists and entrepreneurs nowadays are seriously investigating the potential of not only space tourism, but a full-on colonization of different planets in our galaxy.
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, once we have exploited all natural resources of our own planet it seems logical, that galaxy exploration is the next step of our evolution.
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