In many cities, crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?

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from an early age is the main subject of many debates. while teaching overseas
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than secondary
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, it has got a few negative points.
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benefits and drawbacks of teaching a foreign at primary
schools
. I believe that its advantages are far more than disadvantages. On one hand, there are some negative points about learning
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first
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grade are not old enough to learn
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methods and numbers at the same time as
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at school and it is possible to give up from any academic institutes.
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atmosphere should be built like a
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childhood
because
students
spent some years with their dulls and cars, they do not accept huge changes and it might put negative effects on their personality.
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, young kids would like to idle away their hours by playing with their friends,
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.
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positive consequences, according to several researchers, children from an early age are
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talented
, they can learn simply and speak like a native speaker. They have
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mind and
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ability
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which help them to learn easily. All in all, I believe
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teaching
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. It has good some negative effects but I
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