Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree
Over the
last
two or three decades, the world has been facing global warming issue
than ever before due to many reasons. One of the vital reasons for using the Fix the agreement mistake
issues
molded
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moulded
packeds
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packets
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pockets
this
can lead to creates the
pollution of the land and sea. Correct article usage
apply
However
, some think that plastic
bags
should be prohibited because this
can create an adverse effect to
the surroundings. In Change preposition
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this
essay, I will strongly agree with this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, using the
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plastic
bags
have many more effects to
our planet. Change preposition
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Firstly
, plastic
packets cannot reproduce than any other products, these kinds of packets have many more alternative products such
as leathers, rubbers, cloths, trees and some others
natural resources. Taking banana trees, Correct quantifier usage
other
for instance
, this
tree leaf can produce one use protect like drinking cup and eating plat instead
of plastic
cups, as a result
, this
can save our earth from pollution. Obviously, elastic handbags should be banned and other resourses
should be used.
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resources
Secondly
, molded
handbags should be affected the marine creatures enormously, Change the spelling
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can lead to affects
the surroundings negatively. What I mean by Replace the word
effects
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, these kinds of packs should be killed the sea creatures, consequently
, it's reproduction process will be affected. Taking Dolphins and Whales, for instance
, a recent report by BBC news
said by more than 35% of Dolphins and whales have been deathing every year and you can see Change the capitalization
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them by
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the seashore
Hence
, plastic
packs should be prohibited for will prorect
our natural resources.
To conclude, certainly, Correct your spelling
protect
this
part of bags
are created an adverse effects
to the climate namely increasing the death rate of sea lives, Correct the article-noun agreement
an adverse effect
adverse effects
this
cannot reproduce. Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement in the above-mentioned detailes
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details
personally
I believe that the authorities should be taken strict action to banned Add a comma
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plastic
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and will create the
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