Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree

Over the
last
two or three decades, the world has been facing global warming
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than ever before due to many reasons. One of the vital reasons for using the
molded
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packeds
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packets
packed
pockets
,
this
can lead to creates
the
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pollution of the land and sea.
However
, some think that
plastic
bags
should be prohibited because
this
can create an adverse effect
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the surroundings. In
this
essay, I will strongly agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
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plastic
bags
have many more effects
to
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our planet.
Firstly
,
plastic
packets cannot reproduce than any other products, these kinds of packets have many more alternative products
such
as leathers, rubbers, cloths, trees and some
others
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natural resources. Taking banana trees,
for instance
,
this
tree leaf can produce one use protect like drinking cup and eating plat
instead
of
plastic
cups,
as a result
,
this
can save our earth from pollution. Obviously, elastic handbags should be banned and other
resourses
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resources
should be used.
Secondly
,
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handbags should be affected the marine creatures enormously,
this
can lead to
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the surroundings negatively. What I mean by
this
, these kinds of packs should be killed the sea creatures,
consequently
, it's reproduction process will be affected. Taking Dolphins and Whales,
for instance
, a recent report by BBC
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said by more than 35% of Dolphins and whales have been deathing every year and you can see
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seashore
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.
Hence
,
plastic
packs should be prohibited for will
prorect
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protect
our natural resources. To conclude, certainly,
this
part of
bags
are created
an adverse effects
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to the climate namely increasing the death rate of sea lives,
this
cannot reproduce.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned
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details
,
personally
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I believe that the authorities should be taken strict action to banned
the
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elastic
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plastic
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shopping
bags
and will create
the
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awareness about using
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plastic
bags
to people.
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  • detrimental
  • non-biodegradable
  • pollution
  • biodegradable
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  • ecosystem
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