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Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #events #waste #money #celebrations #role #lives #individuals #society
It is
controverial
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controversial
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people
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vast money on organizing the occasion for celebrating the important days
such
 as a wedding, and a birthday
,
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 or these occasional events are essential to
people
 and communities, which should be definitely arranged. In
this
 essay, I will elaborate
both
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 viewpoints, and
presumably
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 advocate why
people
 should have the celebrations. On the one hand, it is hard to reject that the cost of celebrating
organization
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an organization
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 is very expensive due to the procurement including foods, beverages, and entertainment that need to be offered to
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numerous guests.
For example
, my family had to spend
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half of million baht in order to organize my sister's wedding for just a day, which the list of
payment
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payments
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 consisted of dinner tables for 200 guests, a music band, a hotel room, wedding dresses, diamond rings, and an organizer.
Therefore
, it
seem
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 to be a waste of money for organizing a costly wedding to just let others know that they are married.
On the other hand
, occasional
celebration
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celebrations
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 play a vital role in experiencing unforgettable moments. As we do not have
the
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important events
everyday
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, it is worthwhile to pay for happiness. Obviously, It was
the
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 remarkable moment for my sister, which seemed to be the best day of her life that all family members, friends, and important persons participated
her
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in her
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 wedding, and spent
the
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quality time together.
Moreover
, the married celebration is considered as the tradition for Thai
people
.
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a
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respect to both parents of married couples,
this
 wedding
celemony
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ceremony
 should be handled to officially announce that since today, both of them will
became
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 the same family.
Hence
, the role of
wedding
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the wedding
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 is not only spending remarkable moments together
,
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 but
also
 preserving the national tradition. In conclusion,
although
 arranging the celebration will cost a huge amount of budget, I'm still
in
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 the side that handling occasion is essential because it provides
the
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valuable experiences to
people
 and
also
follow
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 the national tradition.
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