Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many authorities believed that having
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economic
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is the key point of the
country
.
However
, other people think that there are other aspects that contribute equally
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the
country
’s
development
. In my opinion,
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the finical

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status of the
country
is very crucial whereas other progress
such
as
education
, political stability and health care
are
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equally important as well. On the one hand, the
development
of the nation is being measured by economic growth which
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many pay more attention
on
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that issue rather than other factors. By developing
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national’s
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economic progress of the
country
, it can create more job opportunities and a business venture for citizens so that they can collect higher tax as income per capita will increase.
Moreover
,
this
fund can provide
basic
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needs of their people
for example
infrastructure, health care,
education
, finical aid, etc. In
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, the developed
country
with better finical progress
provide
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greater health care facilities during pandemic outbreaks while poor
country
struggling to fight for it.
For instance
, the wealthy nation gets fully vaccinated for covid-19 by the arrangement of their
government
.
On the other hand
, most people suggest investing
on
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in

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one factor will not achieve
their
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target that their
government
aim
.
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To be more precise, governments need to balance each and every sector, especially in the political stability and
education
sector. Foreign investors will withdraw their investment which can seriously lead to
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of
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economic growth. In Myanmar, the typical example of being
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a victim
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of
the
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political unrest, GDP significantly dropped and
inflation
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the inflation

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rate rocketed about 13% within a few months after
military
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a military
the military

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coup.
Additionally
, it is difficult to improve the
country
’s
development
unless
government
supports
on
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the
education
system and should pay attention
on
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this
. Changes can’t be seen overnight whereas educated and skilled workers
are need
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are needed

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for every category for building
country’s
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the country’s

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foundation. In conclusion,
government
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the government

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should take into
accounts
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account

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for
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other aspects while focusing on the
economic
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. In my view, there
is
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are

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nothing less or more important factors to improve the
country
development
.
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