Nowadays, the use of animal testing in medical research has become a hot topic. Some people believe that animal testing should be banned, whereas others claim it is necessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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, some say that animal testing should be prohibited because many
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for many diseases even deadly
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before they found they have put
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is a common and natural
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said by more than 50% of
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around the world.
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will be taken to scientists. To conclude, animal testing is a popular heated topic
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the world. medical testing of
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testing should be prohibited. In my opinion, about
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