Some people think the fittest and strongest individuals and team will win in sports, while others believe it is those who have a good mental attitude will win in the end. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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modern age, the athletes should prepare themself as much as possible to be a champion. While there are those people who believe that the individuals and team performance will lead them to win in competitions, some argue that the professionals who have a solid mentality will win. I strongly believe that
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should be able to handle pressure and
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have abilities to be a winner.
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with, the world would have never lack talented
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and in every ,competitions
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' skills are crucial to secure those athletes to finish top rank.
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, in
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, Brazil is one of the countries that produce many skilful
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even though there are some of them who can not reach their prime. In the past, Brazil international
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team have shown everyone that only high potential
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in the squad are enough for them to be a champion because they have won the Worldcup trophy many times.
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, when sport sciences have been involved in
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, making every player enhance their fitness. Every top-class player has almost the same abilities,
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the factor that will measure the true champion is a mental attitude. Having said that, if those
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have a good mental attitude, it would allow them to handle pressure when they are in the field.
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, Germany, one of the best
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teams, hardly ever lost in a penalty shootout
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they
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have many superstar
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in the team compare with England that commentators always criticized that they are soft. To conclude, athletes who have either great individual's performance and
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have strong personalities are considered to be a favourite in every sport. I believe that these
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will finish in the top rank even though they are against some struggling performance.
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