International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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Recently, thanks to globalization, travelling has become very common.

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, a lot of money from annual savings is spent by travellers where they go.

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, the local economy takes advantage of all the income tourism causes.

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, overtourism can damage both the environment and locals.

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, the main advantage is that lots of earnings are made from tourist places like restaurants, hotels and attractions.

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, that money is sometimes spent to finance

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the restorations

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of monuments.

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, inside Trevi's fountain, roughly one million euros are collected every year!

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income is used by the municipal administration to preserve other historical beauties in the city.

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, If a certain place is visited by more people than it is capable of, it will certainly be harmed,

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local inhabitants.

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, in The Maldives a couple of years ago was popular among tourists to bring home samples of sand, causing disastrous consequences

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local animals like turtles. In fact, since their eggs were hatching under the sand, by removing it an enormous amount of unborn turtles were killed. In conclusion, overtourism is both a plague and a fortune for locals. I believe that the pros will outweigh the cons if some reforms are made in the near future. An example is what is happening in Sardinia, where local authorities restrict entrances to some protected beaches by making tourists book in advance.

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access to the beach is limited, and a tax to whoever wants to visit the place is applied.

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results in preserving the landscape and making money at the same time.

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While your ideas are clear, try to explore the disadvantages of international tourism in more depth and detail for a more balanced perspective.

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You provided relevant examples, such as the Trevi Fountain and The Maldives, which strengthen your arguments and illustrate your points effectively.

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The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing your argument.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

enormous benefit
impact
local inhabitants
environment
disadvantages
outweigh
advantages
economic benefits
job creation
cultural exchange
infrastructure development
promotion
local products
environmental impact
exploitation
resources
cultural erosion
increased cost of living
overcrowding
congestion
balancing
benefits
disadvantages

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your colleague has invited you to his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to the friend. Explain the situation, Say why you will not be attending, Say something about the period you have worked together and his/her work.

While some suggest the best way to combat climate change is by having a carbon tax on large corporations’ activities, others think that individuals paying tax on their own carbon footprints will have a greater impact.

Some people think that competition at work , at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. discuss both views and give your own opinion.