Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sugary drinks and foods are extremely unhealthy and are consumed in large quantities globally. In some countries, there has been a recent introduction of special taxes on these items. Some
people
believe that this
is a good idea, while
others do not agree. Both sides of the story shall be discussed in this
essay.
Taxation of sugary beverages and food items can cause a decrease in their levels of consumption. This
,in turn, can indirectly force people
to lead healthier lives. For instance
, one bottle of coca-cola
is said to contain about 9 teaspoons of Change the capitalization
Coca-Cola
sugar
. The daily recommended amount of sugar
to be consumed is about 3 teaspoons. If there are laws that make such
drinks inaccessible to the public, they will be healthier eventually.
Having said that, forcing people
to do what the government wants them to do, is never the right strategy. In a democratic country, people
must feel like they have the freedom to make their choices
. Correct word choice
own choices
Moreover
, not everyone has major health problems that require them to cut down on sugar
completely. Depriving small children of the joy of eating sweets, for instance
, seems like a cruel notion. Even doctors recommend that the consumption of sugar
in small quantities is perfectly fine. Furthermore
, even though a product may be banned or excessively taxed, people
will always find ways to acquire it illegally. In addition
to this
, these laws may create a class divide, where the rich are the only ones who can afford these goods.
In conclusion, even though placing high taxes on sugary drinks and foods may cause people
to lead healthier lifestyles, I am of the opinion that it is not a step in the right direction. People
must be allowed to choose what they want to consume, irrespective of whether it is healthy or not.Submitted by sanjanakaturi264 on
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