Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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, we are always monitors. While some people think that

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brings some drawbacks, from my point of view,

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offers both positive and negative effects. On the one hand,

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brings endless benefits to our daily life. Out of

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is that it strengths our security

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ago, we can refer the CCTV footage to catch a criminal or investigate a crime.

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we can speed up the

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make the trial more efficient.

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, we can get immediate notification if someone is in danger.

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, one of the obvious drawbacks of

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is that it

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on our personal freedom.

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is because our movement is tracked, some of us may feel uneasy and insecure.

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,when we are shopping, the camera, installed by the shop owner is recording every

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movement. We sometimes feel uncomfortable as we do not know what they will do with the recording.

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of all these nowadays, some people do not enjoy their leisure time in

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public places as they used to do in the past. In conclusion, it is true to say that

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makes our day-to-day life more secure and boots

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, but it should be noted that not all of the outcomes of

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have been positive.

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, we should be careful in using them to minimize its

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