You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, *describe the training course you want to do *explain what the company could do to help you *say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Raj,
I am writing
this
regarding seeking the company's sponsorship for a Java Microservices training program
.
Recently, I came across an advertisement for the Microservices course. This
training program
is organised by Pivtol, they are one of the founders of the design patterns industry. This
program
is 2 weeks long and it starts on the 25th of June.
I want to join this
program
to improve my software development skills although
, the course is very expensive for me thus
I am looking for financial support from our company. Additionally
, the company's letter of recommendation is also
required for my enrollment in this
program
.
I will utilize the learnings of this
course in our current application design which will yield various benefits, firstly
by adopting new design patterns, we can make our applications more robust and reliable, also
we can increase the performance of our websites .
I would really appreciate it if you could support me with this
training program
.
Yours sincerely,
SandeepSubmitted by sandeepniet17 on
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Include more specific details about the training course, such as the key topics or skills you will learn.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, making the letter polite and professional.
task achievement
The letter clearly explains the need for financial support and a recommendation letter, making the request clear and complete.
single idea per paragraph
The use of paragraphs to separate different ideas is effective and makes the letter easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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