Some people say that the government should not spend money building theaters and sport stadium. They should spend more on medical care and education instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many kinds of buildings in the city. A large number of individuals consider that the administration ought not to take

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to construct the movie

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and sports stadiums, whereas others want to build up medicine stores and schools. In my opinion, I agree with

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statement for two reasons. There is no doubt that the elder’s population is increasing.

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life expectancy

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longer than before. To illustrate, when they are getting older, their physical is weakening. As for

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, they are not able to go out to far

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easily. If the hospital is located nearby their house, they easy to visit a doctor and check their recent physical status.

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, citizens can help doctors immediately.

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child has a fever, they are able to go hospital as soon as possible and doctors cope with the problems.

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, the inclining medical institutions are kind and comfortable for local people.

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, it is clear that parents tend to work together.

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means that

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is the trend to get a job

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parent

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.

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, when the government make up a lot of educational institutions, they can leave their children without fear. The academies have a role to protect

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harm.

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, the number of playing

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is getting decreasing because the pupils are likely to play indoor activities or video games. The council provide the opportunity to play outside with

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school’s playgrounds. To sum up, To built

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station and learning system can lead

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positive way than the construction to watch movies and arenas.