More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

There is a very true proverb which states that If

health

is lost, Everything is lost. One of the major

problem

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that our generation is facing is

health

issues due to the lifestyle we live. Some

people

says

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that the solution to it can be

return

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the return

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of Traditional medicine. I partially agree with

this

statement and

therefore

now will be discussing the reasons. We are living in the generation of technology.

Human

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do not need to work hard for anything as we have availability of everything. The type of lifestyle we all are living is affecting our

health

.

However

, we have

medicines

for everybody

problem

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. But as it said excess of everything is very injurious and so taking extra medicine is infecting our liver,kidneys.

Moreover

,lots of

people

get addicted to

medicines

which affect their

health

.

For example

few days before I was not able to sleep properly so a friend consult me to take sleeping tablets but I got into

addiction

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the addiction

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of

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it which caused me other

health

issues.

On the other

hand

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Traditional

medicines

have no side effects. They increased immunity of the body that was the reason

in

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older

people

used to live

long

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life. But the traditional

medicines

was

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not having

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a solution

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solution

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for all the diseases. In the

past

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very less

people

used to get ill and

hence

medicine were

also

less.Let us understand it with an example, Corona has globally infected

people

and had made human life miserable.So, to ,eradicate

this

issue

health

institutes and

Scientist

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have created a vaccine for the benefit

for

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all

people

. So, we cannot use traditional

medicines

to fight these

type

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of illnesses. To conclude, It is true today's generation need modern

medicines

because we can hear new diseases coming like corona but it too

have

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some disadvantages as

people

get addicted to these and so it

effect

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our body.