Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that academy education is mandatory to be successful in
life
. However
, in my opinion, I totally disagree with the idea of relating university
education with success in life
. In this
essay, I will discuss in the first
paragraph, how skills and mental clarity contributes to achieving the highest positions in life
and in the second
paragraph, how experience and willingness to perform tasks matter in securing profound winning.,
Firstly
, having mastery in skills has been observed way more significant than bookish knowledge in this
modern era. That is
the reason why few people are able to set up private profitable enterprises than a person
who has secured masters in business management. In India
, Mr
Dhirubhai Ambani is the most suitable example rather an icon who never attended university
yet set up India
's topmost industries in every sector including petroleum, jewellery, fashion and many more. Secondly
, mental alertness and sound psychology plays a crucial role in achieving higher standards in life
. People with more degrees but in a confused state of mind cannot move ahead in life
. For instance
, my cousin Mr
Karan is a theatre actor who never went to university
and it is an undeniable fact that he has more name, fame and money than my other cousin Mr
Rakesh, who is graduated in political science. Here I would like to mention that Mr
Karan is incredibly clear about his tasks, interests and dedicates time for them, which makes him a wonderful actor as well as a noble person
.
Thirdly
, when it comes to profound success in life
nothing is valuable than an adequate amount of experience. So merely attending university
classes and getting a bunch of degrees is an utterly a waste of time when a person
sits idle without experience. A practical approach to the job is not only valuable but also
mandatory. One clear example is Mrs Deshpande in my neighbourhood. She has innovated different techniques of making Indian food, especially a healthy diet and has successfully run her business in my town for the last
20 years. She transformed her small restaurant into a multicuisine three-star hotel over a period of time. Lastly
, when a person
is full of aspirations and willingness to do certain tasks from the base of heart, nothing can stop them. On the contrary
, doing things with an upset mind is enough to be unsuccessful whereas enthusiasm leads to incredible achievements. To illustrate, the renowned cricket player, Mr
Sachin Tendulkar, from India
is just a secondary school-educated average student. However
, just his ambition and readiness to do efforts made him the number one player in India
.
In conclusion, attending universities and getting acknowledged with various degrees may be important but it is not the only thing that is
needed to be successful in growth. I strongly believe that skills, hard work, a sound mind, zeel of doing work are necessary to achieve the highest potentials in activity
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.