In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In
this
modern world, there has been an increasing tendency for citizens in a number of countries to stay alone rather than engage themselves in any relationship. From my own perspective,
this
trend can lead to positive enhancement for both society in general and each individual
in particular
. The very initial benefit of
this
choice is that each person is able to spend more time on developing themselves, leading to more opportunities for s
uccessful
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career. Take a twenty-four-year-old youngster as an example.
Instead
of spending time on r
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elationship,
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he may find himself more interested in the work he is doing, which ignites his passion for his job and encourages him to learn as well as to devote himself seriously.
This
then
sharpens his potentials and broadens his knowledge in his desired field. There is no reason for a dedicated and eager individual not to acquire achievement and self-improvement after
such
hard work. Each excellent person will, in turn, contribute to a more advanced society.
In addition
, people are living in a world where they make decisions independently;
therefore
, staying alone is more like a choice of life rather than just a marital status. Being alone enables them to have more time for themselves and find their t
ruly
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inner peace.
This
also
allows a better connection between one’s body and soul, leading to a status of h
ealthier
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mental strength o
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each individual. Without mental illnesses, it is easier for everyone to perceive their innate value and ability, resulting in h
igher
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quality of the l
abor
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force for the society. In conclusion, living alone is p
ersonal
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a personal
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choice. People can be beneficial from a life of being alone as
this
way of life makes positive contributions to self-enhancement and a more developing economy.
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